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+++ qlwiki:breakout [2023/08/25 15:11] (current) – [New Horizons Version of Breakout] typos chr
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  ====== Breakout ======
-In mid 1986, Sinclair added a Games cartridge containing Breakout, [[qlwiki:Gun]], [[qlwiki:Hunt]], [[qlwiki:Pirate]], [[qlwiki:Zfred]] to the standard software supplied with the boxed Sinclair QL.
+In mid 1986, Sinclair bundled the Games cartridge, containing Breakout, [[qlwiki:Gun]], [[qlwiki:Hunt]], [[qlwiki:Pirate]], [[qlwiki:Zfred]] to the standard software supplied with a new Sinclair QL.
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  ======New Horizons Version of Breakout ======
-This version of Breakout was reviewed in QL User December 1985.  It features one ot two-player options, with variable ball speed and angle adn three moving walls.  As with the Sinclair version, the screen was split into two, with about half used for the playing area, and the rest of the screen showing the scores for the two players and the highest score so far.
+This version of Breakout was reviewed in QL User December 1985.  It features one or two-player options, with variable ball speed, angle and three moving walls.  As with the Sinclair version, the screen was split into two, with about half used for the playing area, and the rest of the screen showing the scores for the two players and the highest score so far.
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 Reviews: Unknown\\
 Sources Available from: n/a\\
-Latest Version available from:  [[http://www.dilwyn.qlforum.co.uk/games/qlgames.zip|Sinclair QL Homepage]]\\
+Latest Version available from (search page for QL Games Cartridge):  [[http://www.dilwyn.qlforum.co.uk/games/|Sinclair QL Homepage]]\\